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June sweat meandered down my brow
as I daydreamed out the classroom window

The teacher’s voice was muted by restless,
shifting bodies, writhing at their desks

Throbbing faces turned as one
to speed the plodding clock

Recess – swelled to bursting – unleashed
a thunderstorm of feet

Through the steel doorway all of us ran
flooding the playground – a delta of children

The sun, melting and naked,
squinted our eyes, visored by hands

Running, you brushed past me
to the burnished, towering jungle gym

Turning, I focused on a wonder,
mesmerized and dazzled

The whirlwind was the first I’d ever seen
It raced across the playground shifting, turning, dancing

Every gyration brought it closer
to the bars on which you sat

Then the spinning dust collided
with your dangling, slender legs

A swirling wind caressed me as I traced
a path up glistening flesh to a skirt lifted briefly by a breeze

You shifted your weight for modesty,
your rising brows questioning me

Looking down I saw dirt upon my shoes
and realized I’d never bowed my head except for prayer

The sudden bell of order blared
and the tide of children ebbed

You brushed past before filing close to me
your hair was gold and tousled, yet smelled of sweat and steel

As class resumed we took our seats,
glanced at the teacher, then smiled

The teacher’s voice was distant
as you scribbled on some paper

I heard you faintly whisper
as I gazed out of the window

And I longed to be near the
jungle gym with a whirlwind blowing through you

- by Til Turner
Thanks for posting this. That's a very cool poem and one I have not seen before. Reading it brought back some memories.
I found a link to the poem (http://www.blackcatpoems.com/t/whirlwind.html) and I'm considering posting it on FB.

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